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Saturday, May 8, 2010

"The Promise" Tim Tebow's Legacy

To fully appreciate the significance of former University of Florida’s quarterback Tim Tebow speech on September 27, 2008 significant background knowledge must be presented prior to evaluating “The Promise.” The 2007 Heisman Trophy winner and Denver Broncos 2010 first round pick was in the midst of his junior year at the University of Florida, and at the time, the Florida Gators were 3-0 and ranked #4 in the college football polls.



With hopes of a second National Championship in three years and the first undefeated season in school history, the Gators went up against the Mississippi Rebels a lowly unranked opponent with a 1-2 record and were thought to be overmatched by the Gators size, speed, and playmaking ability.

The Rebels went on to shock the Gator Nation that day with a 31-30 upset victory, capped by a three-turnover performance from the Gators offense, which led to ten easy points for the Rebels. The most memorable moment for most fans was that Mississippi was able to stop Tim Tebow on fourth and one on his patented quarterback draw that has been so effective for him throughout his college career.

Tebow then made “The Promise” and four months later, the Florida Gators won the National Title despite the heartbreaking loss to Mississippi.



The theories throughout this paper will touch on invention, inartistic proof, ethos, pathos, and logos. Tim Tebow displayed all these abilities in his emotional speech that lasted just a little over two minutes. He does not deny the fact that they lost the game and should have won by saying, “to the fans and everybody of Gator Nation, I’m sorry. Extremely Sorry,”

This display of invention on behalf of Tebow would be the stopping point or stasis. Not only does he disagree with the fact that they had lost, but he also feels so proudly about the University of Florida and their fans. That is why Tebow was ashamed of himself for the nature of how he lost the game. He could have easily blamed his teammates or coaches for losing but Tebow decided to shoulder the blame and come back the rest of the season like a man on a mission.

He fought back tears as he continued in his speech and showed his humanity and the actuality that football was more than a game to him, it was life.



Inartisitic proof is provided throughout the whole football game such as statistics. Tebow cannot dispute the score in his speech because everyone knows it cannot be changed after the game has been played. Tebow easily constructs a view of himself as a leader when he said, “you will never see another player push his team as hard as I will push everybody the rest of the season.”

He uses ethos in this quote because the audience judged not only what he said, but also how emotional, influential, and sincere he was while constructing his speech on the podium.
The great philosopher Aristotle once said, “It is necessary not only to look to the argument, that it may be demonstrative and persuasive but also [for the speaker] to construct a view of himself as a certain kind of person.”

I find it virtually impossible to think after Tebow said he would push his team as hard as himself, that he is not viewed as being persuasive and demonstrative much like Aristotle said.

Many look at Tebow as a Godly figure. They view him as this because it is one thing to say a speech and try to rally his teammates, but it is another thing to deliver on a promise and win the National Championship.

Three qualities of ethos Tebow evoked were practical wisdom, virtue, and goodwill. These traits are extremely powerful for one person to possess. When a person can say something and after you read it or hear it, it gives you goose bumps. This helps the audience know the rhetor is honest and has the best interest for the community in mind. It is an incredibly dominant tool.

Tebow said, “We wanted an undefeated season. That was my goal, something Florida has never done here. I promise you one thing; a lot of good will come out of this.” After reading this you can tell, he has the University of Florida’s best interest in mind. He chooses such deliberate words to use such as “Promise” and “good.”

Those words make you feel optimistic and have trust in the individual. He shows his identity by making himself vulnerable to the media and to the fans, after delivering such a powerful speech. His speech had lofty goals that people thought he would not be able to accomplish but he and his teammates eventually did.


Tim Tebow arguably uses pathos most effectively in his speech by the way he appealed to the emotions of the audience. He understands how it feels to be a fan of a sports team after an emotional loss.



He said the right things to convince people that the Gators season was not over yet. Tebow says, “You will never see any player in the entire country play as hard as I will the rest of the season.” This brought optisism and hope to every fan of the University of Florida. They know Tebow is so passionate about the game and seeing him cry after the loss touched their hearts, even if they blamed him for the loss. Tebow knew the state of mind the fans were in.

He knew where to direct his emotions, and most of all, he knew the reasons why the fans were feeling the way they did.

Tebow knew the Gators fans were tremendously displeased with the loss. They were emotionally drained and shocked. Tebow used one interesting phrase at the end of his speech. He said “God Bless”, he is a devout Christian and many people that are Gator fans respect the fact he has done many inspiring things off the football field.

This gave Tebow some advantages when people attempted to badmouth him. If they did, they are in a sense speaking out against Christian morals. Everyone would disapprove of someone talking about the character of Tebow. He is involved with routine mission trips, visiting hospitals, and helping anyone he has an opportunity to.

I applaud Tebow because he knew where to direct his emotions. He could have blamed anyone for the loss, he could have come off as being arrogant, he could have acted like he didn’t care about one game like other players do, but he didn’t.

It was evident that he decided to do the right thing. He took the team on his back, and carried them the rest of the season. He didn’t want to make up any excuses as to why they lost, he wanted to show that he and his teammates could overcome the loss and still be National Champions.

He states in his speech that he knew why the University of Florida fans were upset. One of which was obvious, he even says in his speech, “We were hoping for an undefeated season. That was my goal, something the University of Florida has never done before.” He knows how it feels to lose a big game because he grew up a fan of the University of Florida. U.F. has had many heartbreaking losses.

Without knowing the three questions of the audience, it would be impossible to connect emotionally with the audience. Anger, calmness, friendliness, fear, confidence, shamelessness, kindliness, pity, indignation, envy, confidence, and shame are all qualities Tebow understood and that helped him persuade his audience.

He knew everyone felt a different way after a loss. He extended himself in a way that each individual could empathize instead of easily being a fair-weather fan.

The third and final proof Tebow uses throughout his speech are logos. He knew he was the reasoning with people that were passionate about the game. He realized he had to be valid or they would have disproved him. Tebow knew that not all fans of the Gators are from Florida and not all fans are as passionate or as knowledgeable about the game as others. Therefore, it would be silly to jump to conclusions hat would not make sense.

Former Gators linebacker Brandon Spikes said, “I respect him as a man, a guy like that, that gives a speech like that is just something else.” People look at Tebow as more of a leader, a mentor, a genuinely great person, teammate, motivator, and player. It would be difficult to prove a claim that he would make because there is no substantial evidence to back it up.

Tebow does not really apply deduction to any part of his speech. He used generalizations to get his point across. He also didn’t use a single syllogism throughout the speech. He spoke more of a tightly articulated argument.

He did not lead people on; he spoke what he meant and did not imply any other ideas as to what he said. I also believe when it comes to style with Tebow, the usage is obvious. He uses a simple style which sounds like everyday speech. Again, going back to the part in the speech where he says, “You will never see a team play harder than we will the rest of the season.”

The speech lacks ornamentation and smoothness but it gets the point across to the individuals and audience he was trying to reach. He was not trying to be pretty with his words, he was trying more to make everyone understand what he was going to try and do to overcome the situation they put themselves up against.

The arrangement of the speech was structured in a way that allows Tebow to communicate effectively. He highlighted the important parts of his proof. Aristotle claimed there were really only two necessary parts to a speech. “State the subject and [then] to demonstrate it.”

I believe Tebow did exactly that by saying what the obvious subject was and then demonstrating what he was going to do to fix it. Even though his speech is only about 19 lines long, he displays each part of a speech because he makes his point quick and precise.

He cuts right to the chase when he explained how he wanted an undefeated season and knew everyone else wanted one as well. He provides background information about the topic by apologizing and telling the media and fans that “a lot of good will come out of this.” He outlines his main points by saying he will push himself and his teammates harder than anyone ever has. He supports the claims he made in the speech because he has the character to back it up. He attempted to overcome potential disagreements by stating his conclusions when he motivated the team the rest of the year to win the National Title.

Here is the speech so you can fully appreciate it.


“To the fans and everyone in the Gator Nation, I’m sorry. I’m extremely sorry. We were hoping for an undefeated season. That was my goal, something Florida has never done before.”

“I promise you one thing, a lot of good will come out of this. You will never see any player in the entire country play as hard as I will play the rest of the season. You will never see someone push the team as hard as I will push everybody the rest of the season.”

“You will never see a team player harder than we will the rest of the season”

“God Bless”

Friday, April 23, 2010

2010 NFL Draft; Round One Wrap Up

2010 NFL Draft Round One Wrap Up

The biggest surprise of the 2010 NFL Draft did involve Tim Tebow after all. With the 25th pick in the draft the Broncos used their selection on University of Florida quarterback product.

Rumors began to circulate that the Buffalo Bills were trying to trade up in hopes of landing the all time touchdown leader in SEC history. The Broncos selected Tebow before the Bills had the opportunity to land the popular Gator.


Tebow is going to give the Denver organization a much needed spark when it comes to leadership and team energy. “They're going to get my heart and soul and everything that comes with me,” said Tebow. He will help impact the culture in Denver after the Brandon Marshall situation that gave the Broncos brass a black eye.

"I think I just showed them I was going to do whatever it takes," Tebow said. "Just my work ethic and them believing in me, I can accomplish what they want me to accomplish." Ideally he will come into training camp and be able to compete with Kyle Orton for the starting quarterback job.

Another team who made out well in the first round was the Detroit Lions. They selected Nebraska defensive tackle Nadamukong Suh with the second overall pick and then traded back into the first round and selected highly coveted Cal running back Jahvid Best with the 30th pick. This move solidifies the Lions on both sides of the ball.

Finally, the Dallas Cowboys showed their willingness to selected troubled Oklahoma State wide receiver Dez Bryant. He immediately adds a playmaker to the Dallas receiver corps. One of the main reasons Bryant had dropped to the bottom half of the draft was his attitude and his work ethic but Dallas must have seen something different to worthy his selection.

After passing on Randy Moss back in 1998, Cowboys owner Jerry Jones didn’t want to make the same mistake twice by not drafting the most talented receiver in the draft because of attitude problems.


Top players available in round two:

Jimmy Clausen, QB, Notre Dame

Sergio Kindle, DE/OLB, Texas

Carlos Dunlap, DE, Florida

Rodger Saffold, LT, Indiana

Colt McCoy, QB, Texas

Taylor Mays, S, USC

Brian Price, DT, UCLA

Saturday, April 17, 2010

2010 NFL Mock Draft First Round (11-21)

Here are the second installment for Shaft Sports 2010 NFL Mock Draft picks (11-21). Monday will be the final publication of picks (22-32). Let us know what you think!



#11: Denver Broncos (From Chicago): Rolando McClain, LB – Alabama

The Broncos look to strengthen their defensive unit after breakdowns in coverage’s and poor tackling cost them a few games last season. McClain would transition well into Denver’s 3-4 defense. His power and strength along with his ability to shed blockers would make him a good fit along side D.J. Williams. Other options could be Oklahoma State’s Dez Bryant to replace recently traded Brandon Marshall but Bryant is a lot like Marshall in the attitude department.



#12: Miami Dolphins: Dan Williams, DT – Tennessee

Dan Williams was an anchor for the Tennessee Volunteers over the past three seasons, and would be an ideal fit for the Miami Dolphins. He’s a great run defender and can consistently cog the middle and get penetration. He’s got a nasty attitude and has the power to bull-rush defenders with ease.



#13: San Francisco 49ers: Trent Williams, OT – Oklahoma

The 49ers made progress last season buying into head coach Mike Singletary’s philosophy. They have some weapons that could blossom into elite talent this season. San Francisco will need better protection if they have any chance at surpassing the Arizona Cardinals for tops in the NFC West. Trent Williams has good technique and translates well at right tackle with the ability he has to sustain blocks.




#14: Seattle Seahawks (From Denver): Jason Pierre-Paul, DE – South Florida

With Patrick Kerney getting long in the tooth, Seattle uses their second of two first round picks on the freakishly athletic defensive end Jason Pierre-Paul from USF. At 6’5, 270 lbs he has the ability to add more bulk as he matures. He has good range and natural quickness being able to run down defenders within the backfield.





#15: New York Giants: Kyle Wilson, CB – Boise State

The Giants are looking to get more out of their corners this season after a porous previous season. Kyle Wilson’s athletic ability in the return game is an added bonus. He’s lacks ideal speed but makes up for it with his quickness and his ability to close quickly on double-move routes.





#16: Tennessee Titans: Dez Bryant, WR – Oklahoma State

The Tennessee Titans will take risk with Oklahoma State wide receiver Dez Bryant because of his athletic ability. Paired with last years first round pick Kenny Britt, Bryant would give the Titans a legitimate target they haven’t had since Derrick Mason left years ago. The Titans have never had a problem selecting players with personal issues as they selected Adam “Pacman” Jones when he had issues brought up in his draft year.





#17: San Francisco 49ers (From Panthers): Derrick Morgan, DE – Georgia Tech

San Francisco will use their second first round selection to help improve their defense. Derrick Morgan is the best available player on the draft board and would step into and give the 49ers a good rotation player. He has the ability to play either defensive end or outside linebacker, making him more valuable because of his versatility.





#18: Pittsburgh Steelers: Maurkice Pouncey, C – Florida

Ben Roethlisberger was sacked a league high 50 times during last season. The Steelers need to improve their offensive line production and Maurkice Pouncey could be the answer. He can play either center or guard so his versatility is a bonus. Pouncey has been a four-year starter and has a good first step while being able to block larger defenders. He will see the field early and often.





#19: Atlanta Falcons: Taylor Mays, FS – Southern Cal

Atlanta finished 28th in pass defense for the 2009 season. They allowed an average of 241.9 yards against per game. Mays has size (6’3, 230 lbs), speed (4.43 forty), and athleticism which is a rare combination at the safety position. He’s an aggressive hitter and plays the run game exceptional. Mays would give the Falcons someone opponent’s receivers would fear across the middle.





#20: Houston Texans: Carlos Dunlop, DE – Florida

If Dunlop would have been a year old he would have easily been a top-ten draft pick during the 2009 draft. At an enormous 6’6, 277 lbs he is an exceptional run stopper. He also has shown flashes of being able to dominate the offensive line to get pressure on quarterbacks. Dunlop would be a great addition to a young and talented defense in Houston.




#21: Cincinnati Bengals: Earl Thomas, SS – Texas

In recent draft the Bengals have done a great job at improving their defense. They will continue this trend drafting Longhorns strong safety Earl Thomas. He is an excellent open-field tackler who has ball skills that give him big-play ability whenever he is on the field. The Bengals finished within the top ten in pass defense but can’t pass up a play maker like Thomas.